The Yard Sale - 2nd draft

Here's the second draft of The Yard Sale . Still needs editing and proof reading but the story is following a nice arc and I like the characters and tone. I'm really going to try to get as much out of this editing class as I can - just looking at a piece of work like The Yard Sale is really helpful. Taking on one of my novels to rewrite would be too big at the moment. I'm glad I decided to go with a short story. We'll see how it progresses. I have 4 more classes:)